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I've been working on this for a month now. It is my final paper and I am sick of reading it over and over and moving things around. My eyes are killing me.

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Homework is an assignment given to students by school teachers and in most cases is to be done outside of the classroom (“Homework Research and policy” 1). In the early 20th century, an anti-homework movement led to the elimination of homework for students in kindergarten through eighth grade in some of the school systems across the U.S. Support however, returned for homework in the 1950’s when “the American government became concerned about competing successfully with the Russians in the development of space travel and military technology” (Stein, Ph.D. and et al. 9). The 1983 government report A Nation at Risk, placed focused attention on “the failings of American schools” and “U.S. economic competitiveness”. Add to these concerns the increased competition to get into colleges and the required standardized tests that start in grade school and it is not difficult to see why support for homework is back (Ratnesar 1). Also, the “recent educational reforms, such as the No Child Left Behind Act and the standards-based education initiatives across the country have sparked new discussions about the important role of homework in raising academic standards” (Stein, Ph.D. and et al. 9). The results of numerous research studies show that students given the right dosage of grade and age level appropriate material for homework benefit in their academic achievements.
There are many positive effects that can be derived from doing homework. For one, students’ retention and understanding of classroom lessons can be increased and reinforced through homework material. Homework also can improve time management and study and organizational skills. Given in the right dosage, homework can improve attitudes toward school and teach students that learning does not just exist in the classroom. Learning outside the classroom promotes student independence by encouraging the development of a students’ ability to learn by one’s self. Homework also aids in promoting responsibility and a love of learning in the students’ life. Homework helps to spark the parents’ interest and lead them to become involved in the school community. School community involvement increases “parental appreciation of education and student achievement” (“Homework Research and Policy” 1). Homework is part of the recipe for success when it comes to student academic achievement.
However, there can be possible negative effects of homework as well. Results regarding homework studies conducted show that if students spend too much time on homework, they will become bored with it as with most anything else done for too long a period of time. Homework also limits the time students have for leisure, spiritual and community activities that can also serve to teach important life lessons. Another negative can be parental interference; no matter how well meant their intentions may be. “Parents can confuse children if the teaching methods they employ differ from those of teachers” (“Homework Research and Policy” 2). Behaviors such as cheating, copying assignments or receiving help that involves more than tutoring, for example buying a paper, can also be a tempting result from too heavy of a homework load. Students that have less financial resources are likely to have more problems completing homework than others as they may be required to work after school to help the family finances, or they may not have a quiet place to do their homework due to smaller homes and more siblings sharing a smaller space (“Homework Research and Policy” 2). Knowing what the possible negative effects of homework are can help school districts make appropriate guidelines so that homework continues to be a useful tool in academic achievement and not a hinderance.
Parents that get too involved in homework can end up pressuring their child; maybe not even realizing they are doing so (“Does Homework Improve Academic Achievement”). Many times parents end up becoming more than helpers as far as their child’s homework assignments go. Most of this is due to an overload of homework, but some of this is also due to “parents wanting their kids to look good” according to psychologist Kim Gatof. David Nihill, a school principal, in regards to a project that was obviously made by a parent, states "It looks like Alexander Graham Bell made it himself” (Ratnesar 3).
 
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Susan Solomon of San Francisco saw her son bogged down last year with a language-arts paper that would help his application to an elite high school, she took matters into her own hands: she did his math homework. He later copied his mother's calculations in his own handwriting. "He knew how to do it," Solomon shrugs. "It was just busywork." (Ratnesar 3)
Educators frown on parents' doing homework for their kids; they should instead be monitoring homework and offering guidance, but not the answers when asked for help. Open communication between parents and teachers should include a breakdown on how the kids are handling their homework load (Ratnesar 4). According to Cooper, the “nation’s best-known researcher on homework” (Strauss A04) the actual role parents should play in the doing of a child’s homework should be minimal (“Homework Research and Policy” 4).
“The number-one reason students gave for not doing their homework was that they didn’t have enough time.” (Kralovec and Buell 56) An undue amount of stress can be experienced by students that try to balance homework, extracurricular activities, and family life (Kralovec and Buell 1). Kids seemingly have little time to enjoy leisure activities or family relationships. U.S. students come home with more homework than their predecessors ever did according to researchers at the University of Michigan:
“6-to9 year-olds in 1981 spent 44 minutes a week on homework; in 1997 they did more than two hours’ worth. The amount of time that 9-to11- year-olds devoted to homework each week increased from 2 hours and 49 minutes to more than 3 ½ hours. (Ratnesar 1)
Second-grader Julian Forester and his mother have had plenty of evenings where the homework caused nothing but frustration. Julian and his mom Anne would sit down at 5:30 to work on two pages of homework and it would end up taking 2 hours to complete the assignments, “even though the district’s guidelines say Julian shouldn’t have more than 10 minutes of homework a night” (Nyhan News A1).
Molly Benedict, a sixth-grader at Presidio Middle School in San Francisco begins her homework as soon as she gets home from school. Molly relies on her mom for feedback. Libby, Molly’s mom, makes suggestions and corrections on one of Molly’s homework assignments. Molly then tackles her next homework assignment that has more than a hundred math problems on it. After that assignment is another one and then another one. When all of Molly’s homework is done she barely has enough time for piano lessons or dinner, much less family or leisure time before bed (Ratnesar 1).
The strain of too much homework not only causes stress for students, but for parents as well. “Parents see their kids struggling with far heavier workloads than they ever carried. And parents have less time to help” (Nyhan News A1). “The growth in dual-income families means less energy and shorter fuses for assisting the kids” (Ratnesar 2). Economist Barry Bluestone reports “that in the last two decades the average two-earner couple has taken on an additional four months of full-time work outside the home” (Kralovec and Buell 6). Many American parents do not have the extra time or the knowledge that it takes to give children the help they need in regards to homework. Demands made by corporations on full-time employees have increased over the last 40 years. Many companies require longer hours and with American employees being in fear of losing their jobs or not climbing the corporate ladder, they abide by the demands placed on them. It has become increasingly obvious that the poor do not have the same educational opportunities as their counterparts. “Test scores are tied directly to the wealth of a community: the more money, the higher the test scores” (Kralovec and Buell 65). The relationship between class and academic achievement is important “because homework affects people of different classes differently, and therefore the practice of homework appears to further disadvantage the already disadvantaged” (Kralovec and Buell 77). Parents try to make more money to improve their child’s education but it ends up just being a trade off because now the parent lacks the energy and time that the child may need in regards to monitoring homework.
At the same token, parents could benefit from a new and more fine tuned perspective, due to the fact that “American students on the whole still work less, play more and perform worse than many of their counterparts around the world” (Ratnesar 4).
AFT member Carol Huntsinger, a professor of psychology and education at the College of Lake County in Illinois, has followed groups of Chinese- American and white students, starting in 1993 when they were about 5 ½ years old and continuing through third and forth grade in her latest analysis. (Both groups consisted of similar two-parent, middle-class families.) Rather than focusing on traditional school-assigned homework, her longitudinal study looked at the formal and informal work that parents give their own kids. On a variety of academic measures, assessed three times over the course of six years, the Chinese-American students impressively outperformed their white counterparts in math. And, in a result that surprised Huntsinger, the Asian students even did better in English and vocabulary by third grade after lagging behind earlier (not surprising, because Chinese is the main language spoken in many of their homes). Huntsinger is quick to add that the Chinese-American students showed no signs of undue stress and were no less creative than their non- Asian peers, two common stereotypes often directed at hardworking Asian students. Even among teachers, she says, she finds a mistaken belief that Asian parents are taskmasters who are too hard on their kids. “I think we need to understand what they’re doing rather than immediately labeling it as pushing their child too much,” Hunsinger argues (American Federation of Teachers).
Another issue regarding homework that American parents should care about is the uneven and poorly conceived way in which homework is planned and assigned. "What defines the homework problem in the U.S. today is variation," Cooper says (Ratnesar 4-5). Too much homework or lack of instruction from the teacher or parent can lead to a child in tears, a headache for Mom or Dad, or just an overall negative experience for all involved. Kate Astrove, who is in second grade, “sometimes came home with math problems so vexing that Christina Astrove (her mother) wondered whether algebra was required to solve them” (Ratnesar 2). Mrs. Astrove and her daughter spent hours on some of the problems, finally giving up because the problems were too difficult to solve. Mrs. Astrove stated that she would end up having to leave them for her husband to do when he got home from work. According to the Astrove family the issue of homework made their entire time in the evenings together negative and painful (Ratnesar 1-2). Experiences like these kill the intrinsic motivation for learning. Clearly quantity of homework is not the only important issue with homework. Quality of homework is just as important.
In a study of students, Professor of language and literacy education at Penn State Pat Hinchey stated, “It’s time to stop dismissing students’ criticisms as irrelevant excuses for laziness, to ask ourselves if we (teachers) deserve their criticism, and to start thinking critically about exactly what we assign, under what conditions, and why” (Kralovec and Buell 58) “I would suspect most of the homework decisions that are being made on a daily basis by teachers, principals and school boards are a matter of judgment and not a matter of research,” said Nathalie Gehrke, a professor of teaching and curriculum at the University of Washington’s College of Education (Nyhan News A1). It seems that little attention is paid to the topic of homework during a teacher’s education. It also appears that they receive little training in how to come up with meaningful assignments, how much to give, and how to involve the parents in the the students’ homework (“Homework Research and Policy” 1).
Today, schools of education provide varying levels of training in the art of designing homework assignments that are more than busywork, usually imbedded in courses about curriculum. Many, however, offer none, and teachers say they wish the schools had (Strauss A04).
“One isn’t born knowing how to make sensible lesson plans and homework assignments,” said Karen Zabrowski, a seventh-grade reading teacher at Chippewa Falls Middle School in Wisconsin (Strauss A04)
Too much homework, too difficult homework, and too little guidelines and communication between school and home has kids and parents stressed out and torn over homework. Parents want to be involved, but how involved should they be? Should they help or should they back off but then possibly risk having a frustrated, sleep-deprived child? Should parents stop complaining about the amount of homework and be thankful that kids are being challenged toward higher academic achievement? Homework battles in some school districts have lead to formal guidelines regarding the amount of homework kids at each grade level should be taking home (Ratnesar 2).
 

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Opinions however cannot tell us whether homework works or not; only research can. Professor of psychology and director of Duke’s Program in Education Harris Cooper, the “nation’s best-known researcher on homework” (Strauss A04) and his colleagues have conducted numerous homework studies to “examine whether homework is beneficial and what amount of homework is appropriate for our children” (“Does Homework Improve Academic Achievement?”). Twenty research studies regarding the achievement of students whereas students given homework vs. students given no homework showed 14 of the 20 studies favored giving homework. 14-16 year olds that did homework out performed 69% of students that did no homework. 11-13 year olds outperformed their counterparts by 35%. The 2nd graders did better on math. The 3rd and 4th graders did better on English skills and vocabulary. The 5th graders did better on Social Studies. And 9th through 12th did better on American History and Shakespeare (“Does Homework Improve Academic Achievement?”). Another study conducted by Cooper was homework vs. in-class supervised. Homework proved to be superior to the in-class supervised for Jr. High and High school students. The in-class supervised proved to be superior to homework when it came to the elementary students (“Homework Research and Policy” 2).
Further research of 50 state and national surveys were done in regards to actual time spent on homework and it’s correlation to achievement, and even further research was done in 9 other studies where the amount of time spent doing homework was increased. The results were per the following:
43 out of 50 showed that students who did more homework had better achievement. Grade level effect was present in the research. Elementary correlation was almost 0 and the performance didn’t improve with increased time doing homework. Middle grades were +7% and performance increased until the assignments took more than 1 ½ hours a night. High school grades were +25% and performance continued to increase through the highest point on the measurement scales (“Homework Research and Policy” 2-3).
According to Cooper’s research Cooper states that “in Grades 2-5, the students do better on unit tests when they do short homework assignments on basic skills that relate directly to the test” (Strauss A04). “With only rare exception, the relationship between the amount of homework students do and their achievement outcomes was found to be positive and statistically significant,” according to the spring 2006 edition of “Review of Educational Research” (“Duke Study”). Cooper states that “the relation between homework and student academic performance is influenced heavily by grade level” (“Homework Research and Policy” 5). Cooper and his colleagues also suggest many reasons why “older students benefit more from homework than younger students” (“Duke Study”). It is understood that young elementary students have a more difficult time when it comes to tuning out distractions. They also do not possess developed study habits as older students. But these are reasons why elementary teachers should assign homework instead of not assigning it. Homework helps young students develop time management and study skills that may not immediately affect achievement, but will as they advance in school (“Duke Study”). One type of homework assignment that helps achievement at all grade levels is practice assignments. They have been shown in research studies to improve scores on each grade level’s class tests (“Does Homework Improve Academic Achievement”).
So what is the right amount of time to be spent on homework? Cooper recommends “10 to 20 min. nightly in first grade and an increase of 10 min. a night for each grade after that” (Ratnesar 4). For example a fourth-grader would be assigned 40 minutes of homework a night, a fifth-grader would get 50 minutes and so on. High school seniors would get approximately two hours of homework a night. According to studies, for upper high school students, any homework over two hours was not associated with higher academic achievement. Homework is obviously important and a critical component to learning but as Cooper states “the analysis also showed that too much homework can be counter-productive for students at all levels. Even for high school students, overloading them with homework is not associated with higher grades” (“Duke Study”).
Research concludes that most homework should not be graded, but should be checked for completeness. Its main purpose is to give instructional feedback and to be able to identify if individual students are having a problem in a particular area so that it can be addressed and the students do not fall behind or just get totally lost in class. Jr. High school homework should involve required and voluntary assignments that involve tasks that are intrinsically interesting thus promoting a love of individual learning outside of the classroom for life. High school homework should be an extension of the classroom involving a lot of practice and review (Cooper “Homework and Policy” 3-4). As per the results of research students given the right dosage of grade/age-level material for homework are going to benefit in their academic achievements. Isn’t this what we all want for our child?
Unfortunately, less than a third of U.S. school districts provide guidelines to their school system regarding how much homework children should be doing and what purpose it is to serve. The author of Helping Your Child with Homework recommends that homework assignments “should have specific purpose, come with clear instructions, be well matched to a student’s abilities, and designed to help develop a student’s knowledge and skills” (Stein, Ph.D. and et al. 10). Homework that requires students to practice material already taught, as well as assignments meant to prepare students for upcoming lessons, both proved beneficial (Cooper “Homework Research and Policy” 3). Everything points to the need for school districts to have formal policies that require homework to be meaningful and purposeful at all grade levels and not just prescribed busy work.
School districts’ guidelines need to require teachers to coordinate assignments between classes and assign homework with precise goals in mind, outlining exactly what they expect of students and for what academic purpose so that students and parents can forgo many negative evenings of watching an overburdened or under stimulated child in regards to their homework assignments. Elementary school students should be assigned homework to help them develop good study habits and promote positive attitudes toward school, but this needs to adhere to the ’10 minute rule’ and should not be overly demanding (Cooper “Homework Research and Policy” 3). Guidelines and policies will help insure all of these requirements to be met. For the school systems that have homework policies in place, they seem to be working well (Ratnesar 4-5). It is clear that the issue of homework is fixable if school districts will start laying out formal guidelines according to research results and education on the issue, instead of relying on judgments and opinions when it comes to assigning homework.
Nancy Kalish, co-author of “The Case Against Homework,” has a few tips for parents that think their children are given too much, too difficult, or busy work as homework. Kalish says:
Find out whether your school has a written homework policy. If it does, and the teachers are exceeding the time limits, you have ammunition to make sure the rules are enforced. If the school doesn’t have a policy, however, it means that homework is up to the individual teacher and there might be more flexibility than you’d think. Collect e-mail addresses of other parents in your child’s class. Several of you can e-mail the teacher, which just might get him or her to reconsider the assignment. Act immediately. Don’t wait for the parent-teacher conference. Remember that most teachers want your child to love learning. So be cooperative, not confrontational (Nyhan News A1).
It is important for students and parents to have a clear understanding of the homework assignments, which is why it is essential for parents to be upfront right away and at all times with their child’s teacher. Parents need to tell the teacher what works for their child, so that the teacher can increase the chances that the student will have a successful learning experience in which they can gain confidence by approaching the learning process in a more relaxed and efficient manner (Stein, Ph. D. and et al. 136-137).
Cooper said that “eliminating homework makes no more sense than ‘piling it on’ and that the answer is somewhere in between” (Straus A04). Research shows that given in the right amount, homework has value for students at all grade levels. "Homework has benefits that go well beyond its immediate direct impact on what's going on in school," says Cooper (Ratnesar 4). It is clear that sound guidelines need to be put in place regarding homework, based on research, not on opinions. Teachers need more education when it comes to planning and delegating homework, and parents and students need precise instructions in regards to homework that is sent home. For the sake of future student achievement, parent and student sanity, and the betterment of our schools, these suggested guidelines, based on research, need to be set and enforced now.
 

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oh my gosh grace! Well I am working on the first page...I am using track changes in word so if you don't mind give me your email, it will be a lot easier to see the changes this way.
 
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