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SilentEyz

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I thought I would try to put something a little Diffrent from my usual writing in here.. But I decided I better start small :D


When I slept
You were in my dreams
We became exhiles
In the wrong place and time
Reaching through the darkness
To strengthen the light
A kind of mindless fury
Awareness and Anticipation
Brought on the weakness
Of self doubt
You nor I
Could think or feel
Beyond the moment
For there was hatred here
Strong, old and carefully nurtured
Until a fient, fiery glow

Dispelled the gloom
Patterns formed
Unsettleing arrays of images
Took shape only to dissolve
Into other combinations of tints
Most disturbing
It seemed to make sense
Then you became to me
An object of suspicion, yet
A seemingly endless source of
Patience and affection
When I awoke I felt
A strange calm
Overtake my grief
As I realized we are but
A humbling reminder of
Beings who had but one shape
And an endless life span
My dream was
Our past, Our future
Perhaps our destiny


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Kat

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minus the .005% of proceeds to lemon of course :p right? :D ...seriously have you ever thought to compile a book from your poems silent...I think that'd be awsome
 

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Good work silent ... We should actually start a " OFFTOPICZ EXCELLENCE AWARD " system.... Silent you are on this list.
 

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honestly I had thought about it at one point.. and decided against it .. but thanks all of you for your kind words
 

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Its a good thing I search before I post, I was just thinking of posting this one.. guess I will just bump it instead.
 
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