Goat Whisperer
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Out of body experience
Her eyes fluttered open, a cold chill ran along her spine. It was dark. She felt around herself... It was hard beneath her, a solid slab of bone-chilling rock. Wearily, she crawled forward until, she collided with something hard in front. Shakily she rubbed her hands over the rough stone. She felt her way along it, until she ran her hand into another jagged wall. No it was a bump, she moved her hand over that, and further along.
Then the wall ended, nothing there but empty space, she opened her eyes wide but, she still couldn't see. She put her hand out into the empty opening and only felt cold air. She felt down and realized the rock under her hand had ended too, and that she was on the edge of... of something, what it was, she didn't know.
She turned herself around and eased her legs over the side of the rock, she lowered her feet, then her legs and soon half of her body, but all she felt was the rugged rock on her chest and arms but, nothing below, or in front. Bewildered she pulled herself back on top of the rock. Then crawled in the opposite direction, when her hand found once again, nothing it front of her.
She felt along the edge of what she was on, it ran back into a stony wall. She rolled back into a sitting position, and inspected her own body. She rubbed her hand along her legs, but, once again felt the cold air of nothingness. Herself wasn't their only a barrier that stopped her hand from going any further. Where her legs, and body used to be.
The darkness seeped into her eyes and blotched out her mind. Nothing. She couldn't see and she realized that she had only heard silence, she couldn't hear. She tried pulling her self on top of her weak legs. They crumbled underneath her and she sank back down to her meager existence. She tried to move or do anything but, she had lost any control of real movement.
She forgot, who she was. She didn't know where she was, but, she knew that she was scared. Her inner-most body, her soul, was shaking, and she wondered, if she was a soul and if she no longer had a body. Or maybe she never had, had a body at all, maybe her whole existence, had been a far of dream. She whispered, “I'm scared,” but to her astonishment she didn't here anything.
She rolled over onto her back, and everything became numb, lost within herself, it was black, dark, soundless, and loneliness. There was nothing to see, hear, or do. “I must be insane,” She said out loud, but, she still couldn't hear a word, she screamed at the top of her lungs, no sound drifted to her ears.
“Where am I, what is this?”She shouted out, she knew that she had said it, but, no sound came to her ears. She was in a voidness bubble, a place where nothing existed but, touch, and the noise of her thoughts, inside of her brain, that cried out for something anything to prove her existence. She tried to let tears seep from under her eye lids, but, she couldn't even cry.
Time went by slowly, every, minute, second, moment, lasted for hours. She wasn't sure what to do, and finally just began to roll, when she found herself on the edge, she kept on rolling. Until she fell off, and with a sudden rush could tell that she was falling... and falling. Down. Faster and faster, yet she never hit anything, but the open air.
Air blew past her and as she looked towards were she was falling, she could still see nothing but, empty blackness, and once again nothing, was in front of her, it was completely empty and it kept going down forever. She suddenly longed for the security of the ledge she had layed on before.
At first she was falling, then she was floating, between the void of time and space, nothing changing but, the wind blowing past her. If it was her, she no longer knew. She only knew that she could hear herself inside of her conscience, crying out, and she knew that it made no difference whether her eyes were open or not, and she became unsure if they were there at all anymore.
She felt nothing, heard nothing, and saw nothing, only a blank dark world. She gave up, and tried to just fall asleep leave this terrible place, of non-existence, to go back, to her dream world. She couldn't. So she continued to fall through her endless hole, this rip in space it's self.
Then far, far away she could see a very small light and as she came closer to it, it grew bigger. Until it engulfed her, blinded her. She could, all at once see, here, and feel, feel herself. It blinded her, the light, at first. When she blinked a few times she could see, see clearly. She could hear, silent beeps, and the rustle of tools. There was a man with a with a blue mask covering his mouth standing over her, blocking the light from above.
He said something, it was a garbled mesh of words.. Then she could pick out understanding from behind what he was saying underneath his mask, and he said, “I think she is going to be okay.”
The man walked away, and she closed her eyes, and opened them again. She still found herself in the room, with the blinding light staring back at her from above.
She tried to speak, but, their was something blocking her mouth in her throat. She gave-up and sullenly allowed her eyes to close, afraid that she would go back to the darkness, but, to tired to care. She fell back into her slumber.
Not soon after, her eyes opened up again. The room she was in, was fluorescent, without the blinding light glaring into her eyes. She moved her stiff neck to the side and saw a clear window, looking into a bright blue sky. “I'm back.” Her hoarse dry voice whispered out. “I'm back.”
Out of body experience
Her eyes fluttered open, a cold chill ran along her spine. It was dark. She felt around herself... It was hard beneath her, a solid slab of bone-chilling rock. Wearily, she crawled forward until, she collided with something hard in front. Shakily she rubbed her hands over the rough stone. She felt her way along it, until she ran her hand into another jagged wall. No it was a bump, she moved her hand over that, and further along.
Then the wall ended, nothing there but empty space, she opened her eyes wide but, she still couldn't see. She put her hand out into the empty opening and only felt cold air. She felt down and realized the rock under her hand had ended too, and that she was on the edge of... of something, what it was, she didn't know.
She turned herself around and eased her legs over the side of the rock, she lowered her feet, then her legs and soon half of her body, but all she felt was the rugged rock on her chest and arms but, nothing below, or in front. Bewildered she pulled herself back on top of the rock. Then crawled in the opposite direction, when her hand found once again, nothing it front of her.
She felt along the edge of what she was on, it ran back into a stony wall. She rolled back into a sitting position, and inspected her own body. She rubbed her hand along her legs, but, once again felt the cold air of nothingness. Herself wasn't their only a barrier that stopped her hand from going any further. Where her legs, and body used to be.
The darkness seeped into her eyes and blotched out her mind. Nothing. She couldn't see and she realized that she had only heard silence, she couldn't hear. She tried pulling her self on top of her weak legs. They crumbled underneath her and she sank back down to her meager existence. She tried to move or do anything but, she had lost any control of real movement.
She forgot, who she was. She didn't know where she was, but, she knew that she was scared. Her inner-most body, her soul, was shaking, and she wondered, if she was a soul and if she no longer had a body. Or maybe she never had, had a body at all, maybe her whole existence, had been a far of dream. She whispered, “I'm scared,” but to her astonishment she didn't here anything.
She rolled over onto her back, and everything became numb, lost within herself, it was black, dark, soundless, and loneliness. There was nothing to see, hear, or do. “I must be insane,” She said out loud, but, she still couldn't hear a word, she screamed at the top of her lungs, no sound drifted to her ears.
“Where am I, what is this?”She shouted out, she knew that she had said it, but, no sound came to her ears. She was in a voidness bubble, a place where nothing existed but, touch, and the noise of her thoughts, inside of her brain, that cried out for something anything to prove her existence. She tried to let tears seep from under her eye lids, but, she couldn't even cry.
Time went by slowly, every, minute, second, moment, lasted for hours. She wasn't sure what to do, and finally just began to roll, when she found herself on the edge, she kept on rolling. Until she fell off, and with a sudden rush could tell that she was falling... and falling. Down. Faster and faster, yet she never hit anything, but the open air.
Air blew past her and as she looked towards were she was falling, she could still see nothing but, empty blackness, and once again nothing, was in front of her, it was completely empty and it kept going down forever. She suddenly longed for the security of the ledge she had layed on before.
At first she was falling, then she was floating, between the void of time and space, nothing changing but, the wind blowing past her. If it was her, she no longer knew. She only knew that she could hear herself inside of her conscience, crying out, and she knew that it made no difference whether her eyes were open or not, and she became unsure if they were there at all anymore.
She felt nothing, heard nothing, and saw nothing, only a blank dark world. She gave up, and tried to just fall asleep leave this terrible place, of non-existence, to go back, to her dream world. She couldn't. So she continued to fall through her endless hole, this rip in space it's self.
Then far, far away she could see a very small light and as she came closer to it, it grew bigger. Until it engulfed her, blinded her. She could, all at once see, here, and feel, feel herself. It blinded her, the light, at first. When she blinked a few times she could see, see clearly. She could hear, silent beeps, and the rustle of tools. There was a man with a with a blue mask covering his mouth standing over her, blocking the light from above.
He said something, it was a garbled mesh of words.. Then she could pick out understanding from behind what he was saying underneath his mask, and he said, “I think she is going to be okay.”
The man walked away, and she closed her eyes, and opened them again. She still found herself in the room, with the blinding light staring back at her from above.
She tried to speak, but, their was something blocking her mouth in her throat. She gave-up and sullenly allowed her eyes to close, afraid that she would go back to the darkness, but, to tired to care. She fell back into her slumber.
Not soon after, her eyes opened up again. The room she was in, was fluorescent, without the blinding light glaring into her eyes. She moved her stiff neck to the side and saw a clear window, looking into a bright blue sky. “I'm back.” Her hoarse dry voice whispered out. “I'm back.”
