My new song I wrote, still in the making though..

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Silious950

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Hey guys here is a song I've been writing for some time now and would like to see if you guys like it or don't. I write Hip-Hop Lyrics and make music. It's still not done yet though.....

Getting tough and Classy, I'm trying to enact the, underground sound, hereditary like acne, enthralled into a trap, not gonna shut my exact, words, served, obscured, blurred, and now not sure of whats down the road, might explode, from minds who think old and closed, I suppose their satisfied with news and shows. I expand my mind to uncover things unexposed, my flows, show the way on how to discover your brain, for shame, you won't like my views, just look at me and want abuse, profuse out the heart, thats how it is from the start, living in the dark, inspire, light the spark of your passions, now perspire the heart and deliver in rations, infectious like a smile, motivation for the masses, always pushing up my glasses....

When I write, I feel most content with music by my side, coincide within the beat and rhythm, on a joyride, brings elation and harmony to eyes, surprise, expression through diction, no intermission, its a one-way mission, divine intervention, from speaker to brain, whats your position? Allow it to teach and maintain, constrain your dome form the knowledge from home, music makes me happy, solemnly alone, ink drops on the page, all apart of this, only to be shown, the light behold, bold you are shining into my love like a star, connected through feelings, so afar, wish I could proclaim my mind like a czar, ...........


Ehhh???
 
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wow thats really good...i look forward to reading/hearing more of it :) thanks for sharing
 

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I like it, would sound good in a rap! I have a friend MC Mooretime who does similar stuff which is different in MCing. He stays away from the guns and hos kind of shit and raps using meaningful stuff, Shakespeare and the Bible even. You should check his shit out on my myspace top friends, you might like it! Once again, great lyrics dude!:rockon:
 

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haha Peter you said dude hahahaha

Thank you though... I really don't think too much of it because I've never thought I had any talents at all... Maybe I should pursue something in the music industry?
 

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Life is too much about what ifs? At least you can give it a go! The worst is you'll end up in the same place, go for it man!:clap
 
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