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Tyler Durden

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I don't write poetry TOO often........but I've written this one in the last few weeks and I thought I'd share it here.....where you can all disect it (or not)! ;)

Stretching out in front of us, the future exultant
I linger, for you, and the aspiration to embrace you wholly
To be merged in a union, of our making, for all of time
The urgency compounding my every consideration
The concept of you, bathed in my arms, poured into my core
A notion of enchantment as I open, to you, my very souls door

Devoid of an escape route, I’m inclined not to crave
Lost in the mist of our creation, in which we mutually exist
In concert with the dull ache that resides in our hunger
The pain ridden days, that will soon be awash with our adoration
The devoutness to our accord, that will grant us equal harmony
Individually bereft, but together, repleted with our collective devotion
 
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is that one a dirty one?:24::24::24:

im no poet expert, but i liked it and you could tell it had meaning and undertones to it

Well feel free to rip it off and tell people it was yours. I won't sue!!

And quit suggesting I have depth when I'm trying to be vacuous and silly so I can fit in :D
 

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pretty great, TD.

that is a special thing....to welcome the complete consumption by a feeling.

that's what i got from it at least.

rep coming your way :)
 
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