My Future/Our Past

[Charmer]

My Future/Our Past (copyright 2007 by Charmer under his real name)

If I walked away today
knowing I might still love you
would it be enough to make me stay
If I held you for one more minute
would I still feel the love I felt yesterday

I don't know where this road will take me
what I'll feel when I reach its end
but always know there'll be a place in my heart for you
if not as a lover, then always as a friend

We're on different paths
going in different directions
but that doesn't mean
either one is wrong
We had our moments,
our once in a lifetimes,
our yesterdays
our favorite song

The future,
who knows what it holds
but at least we held each other
when we needed to the most

So, I'll be going
carrying the strength you've given me
I wish you the best...
for always, for ever, from me

 

[Charmer]

My Future/Our Past05-16-2007 09:12 AMNot good


Thanks, whoever you are.

Please sign your name next time. I'm not taking this personal, but at least tell me why it's "not good." I have no problem taking criticism as it could better me. But this comment does nothing for me.......:confused

 

[memento_mori]

i like it, i think it's clear, easy to understand, and a good message.

 

[jbarroqueiro]

Nice one... very clear don't listen to the hatters... rep for you

 

[Suzie]

More rep for you Charmer... I think its beautiful... like the other people said...its very clear and to the point. Some people just love to hate!

 

[dt3]

Reminds me of Free Bird (which is a really good thing)

 

[Eridanus]

Once again a beautiful piece of poetry, Charmer.

 

[SilentEyz]

My Future/Our Past05-16-2007 09:12 AMNot good


Thanks, whoever you are.

Please sign your name next time. I'm not taking this personal, but at least tell me why it's "not good." I have no problem taking criticism as it could better me. But this comment does nothing for me.......:confused

Although It Was Very uncool for you to recieve a bad comment for such wonderful work, It is a low Poster who Left it, Its neutral rep, and I have seen that alot of people are getting it.


But Charmer, Your writing is amazing as always, and touches a part of my soul that I am still unable to open.

 

[Charmer]

i like it, i think it's clear, easy to understand, and a good message.

Nice one... very clear don't listen to the hatters... rep for you

More rep for you Charmer... I think its beautiful... like the other people said...its very clear and to the point. Some people just love to hate!

Once again a beautiful piece of poetry, Charmer.

Although It Was Very uncool for you to recieve a bad comment for such wonderful work, It is a low Poster who Left it, Its neutral rep, and I have seen that alot of people are getting it.


But Charmer, Your writing is amazing as always, and touches a part of my soul that I am still unable to open.

Thanks, all of you. I appreciate everything you guys say. It makes me smile.

 

[Charmer]

Reminds me of Free Bird (which is a really good thing)

Freebird?!!! WOW, Donnie! I'm very humbled now. That's one of my favorite songs...live version of course....

You're too nice! Thanks again...

 

[dt3]

Freebird?!!! WOW, Donnie! I'm very humbled now. That's one of my favorite songs...live version of course....

You're too nice! Thanks again...

If I walked away today
knowing I might still love you
would it be enough to make me stay
If I held you for one more minute
would I still feel the love I felt yesterday

If I leave here tomorrow
Would you still remember me?
For I must be travelling on, now,
There's too many places I haven't seen
And if I stayed here with you, now
Things just wouldn't be the same

We're on different paths
going in different directions
but that doesn't mean
either one is wrong
We had our moments,
our once in a lifetimes,
our yesterdays
our favorite song

Bye, bye, its been a sweet love.
And though this feeling I can't change.
Please don't take it badly,
The Lord knows I'm to blame.
And, if I stayed here with you now
Things just wouldn't be the same.


They sound the same to me!