Memory

[random guy 517]

this poem actually has REAL emotions in it. fascinating huh.

-for Annabel. i know you never felt this way about me, but you meant the world to me.

the memory
of you
how they haunt me
i hate them
and yet i love them
just to remember
your face
and all the things
left unsaid
oh, how i miss you so
the wishes
of how i
could go back
and redo everything
to rid you of all
the pain i have caused you
oh, how i wish
i could see you
oh, how i wish
i could hold you
one more time
before the memory
fades forever.

 

[random guy 517]

honestly i dont understand why i keep posting poetry. i mean all of ur writings frickin kick mines ass. might as well either keep em in my journal or quit. :gives:

 

[Charmer]

Hey, hey, there Mister! Why are you kicking yourself? That is a nice poem. It is from your heart, your brain, your experience, your emotion. You're brave enough to put it on this forum; you obviously are proud of it.

Your writing is good. All of the people who post on here have a different writing style unique to them. It's not a competition here at all.
Keep posting. I know for me it helps to know that other people have similar ups and downs, emotion-wise, as I do.

 

[Kat]

ditto to what he said. i think your writing is really good...heartfelt. everyone has a different way of writing...yours is just as good as the next please keep posting...I love reading your poems too

 

[irish_eyes]

I really like it, Im feeling it