Loves Death

[SilentEyz]

I open myself up to you
And you close yourself down
This is such a cruel game we play
Loving each other,
Hating each other
Slowly destroying
The passion we create
Desires burning hot
Creating disasterous flames
Do we purposly plan to destroy
What only we together can build
Creating the ultimate fulfillment
Paying the final price
For such enjoyment
Is that our fate
To die by the hand of our dreams
To allow our love for each other
To slowly become our deaths?


©
SilentEyz (♥)

 

[elluko]

Great job!

 

[Sam]

Poem is good but has negative shades

 

[elluko]

all good poems have negative shades.
Would yot rather the poem be about a happy elf?

 

[Sam]

So tats what I did .. I confirmed tat it has NEGATIVE SHADES.... Read my post again ....read between the lines..... LOL

 

[majikstranger]

lol elluko...Happy elfs.


i wake up angered.
my stomaches rumbling
Damn those happy elfs
theyve screwed me once again.

HAHAHAHAHAHHAHA

 

[SilentEyz]

lol Majik

Yeah, many of my poems tend to have the down side to them.. But some of them dont, Just depends on what is going on in my life when I write them.