Losing

[Johnny]

This is my frist its short ok Here it is

Lose one friend
Lose All friends
Lose Yourself

I know its not really good but its my frist try

 

[SilentEyz]

It is a good Start Johnny.. Now you just need to build on those feelings

 

[Johnny]

Okayday SilentEyz
this was just a short little test start if that makes sence just seeing if I can write Literature I guess I`ll try for awhile but thanks

 

[SilentSinz]

Hey not bad for just starting out, sort of reminds me of a haiku. keep it up and dont force anything, let the writing come to you

 

[Johnny]

Thanks Silent2