Lonely

[Mrs Behavin]

If you ever came to feel my pain
or drowned for a day in my lonely rain
you would know what its like to suffer in my hell
if you listened to the tales I have to tell
you would never again pass judgement on me
you may even understand why sometimes I flee
why I sometimes hide when the road gets rough
or run away when life gets tough

if you had to spend a day in my solitude
my nightmares you couldnt elude
the judgements you first passed would fade away
you would probably hit the ground and pray
to never again see the things that I've seen
to never experience the dreams that i dream

 

[Jersey]

hey- thats me to a T these days

 

[SilentEyz]

Wow Amy.. That's absolutly Amazing.

Why havent you posted in here before, your writing is very powerful.

 

[YouSpinMeRightRound]

If you ever came to feel my pain
or drowned for a day in my lonely rain
you would know what its like to suffer in my hell
if you listened to the tales I have to tell
you would never again pass judgement on me
you may even understand why sometimes I flee
why I sometimes hide when the road gets rough
or run away when life gets tough

if you had to spend a day in my solitude
my nightmares you couldnt elude
the judgements you first passed would fade away
you would probably hit the ground and pray
to never again see the things that I've seen
to never experience the dreams that i dream

Wow, thats really amazing, I wish I could write as well as you do!

 

[Kat]

amazing amy...i know the feeling all to well...also DITTO silent...why havent you posted in here before your writing is beautiful and powerful

 

[Mrs Behavin]

Thanks guys that means alot what you have said
Alot of the stuff I jot down sounds corny to me so I dont ever post or let anyone read it. Alot of it is stuff that Im either angry about or overjoyed about.

 

[SilentEyz]

Which is the heart of Great Writing..

If there was no emotion, It would not Touch others.

 

[Lady Shada]

Wow, very nicely written. I can relate to this in a way. Wonderful!

 

[Suzie]

Beautiful amy!