Life

[darklove]

Life is like water
slipping away
but its never coming back
not to day
and not tommarow
not now
not ever
So some people think they last forever
try a bullet to the head
try a slit to the wrist
try a pool of tears
then you will know what i say
when i say
life is like blood
dripping away
life is like water
slipping away


By Brittany

I HOPE THIS ONE IS GOOD​

 

[Kat]

it is good brit. Just as all your others are...

and id like to add one more thing...have faith in your ability to write...you are a great writer

 

[SilentEyz]

I enjoy the Comparisons.. Simple yet strong enough to see