Inspired by my first date...

[Goat Whisperer]

So I am going on my first real date this thursday with a guy a met at a dance anyways, I wrote a poem inspired by the event... probably not very good, but it's what I am feeling right now! lol

First love sight


Did you remember that wonderful night?
The first time you danced with him in the moonlight.
Did you see his smile and twinkle in his eye?
When you gave him your number and waved good bye.


Do you remember the first phone call that lasted for hours?
And the smell of your first set of flowers?
Or that gut wrenching feeling
That you felt from the door bell ringing?


Do you remember your first love?
When you felt your heart fly higher then above.

 

[Tyler Durden]

Aw, that's lovely AP

I try to write myself. I know when I'm in love my poetry is much much better than when I'm not!

 

[Saffy]

That was a lovely poem. Please don't say that words you feel and that come from the heart aren't very good, they express how you feel and no one can judge that. I hope to read more from you.

 

[Mystic]

that was lovely