Illusion of a dream

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Sam

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I thrull my beliefs in you
You thrull your beliefs in me
Into each other’s land
That’s what we are like

I quest my trust in you
You quest your trust in me
In our eyes we sink
That’s what we are like

I toot you in the mirror
Its not you in the mirror
Its us in the mirror, viewless
That’s what we are like

I wake then I sleep again
I sleep then I wake again
In the night at twelve
Talking about ourselves

I dure for my love again
Neither less the deceive
I ensure my vengeance
Never will I be gone
 
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Good writing sam, a bit hard to feel the full meaning of your words, but a poets work is not always expressed for the reader as much as for the writer.. I like it
 

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good writing sam...and as silent said i too have a little bit of a hard time understanding but i think that makes it more interesting.
 
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