I dunno.

[TheOriginalJames]

I'm in one of those really solemn moods where i just don't care...

I don't think it's finished, but I can't think right now. I haven't done any of this thing we call 'writing' since high school. So yeah, it's going to suck.



Epiphany

I dunno how else to put this
everything is hit or miss
how can that really be
i wish i could figure it out
wondering why i'm treated like that
it seems so unfair to be cast aside
as if it doesn't matter
i always fade into the world
as if nobody cares

 

[andcuriouser]

Doesn't suck. I quite like it.

I think I can relate to the feeling.

 

[Kat]

luv hun *hugs* I know the feeling...maybe in a different way than you...but I know the feeling

 

[TheOriginalJames]

It just doesn't feel complete. There's more to it, there has to be, but I don't know how to put it.

 

[andcuriouser]

Sleep on it, maybe?

 

[Kat]

give it time...it'll come to you...I used to just jot down a bunch clips and phrases before I could come up with a complete poem...like it so far tho

 

[SilentEyz]

Like Kat said, Breathe.. If there is more to it, Then it will come to you.. Forcing it wont help.

But I have to say James.. I Like It