Drowing in sorrow!

[darklove]

Drowing in my sorrow
and crying like theres no tommarow
My heart slowly beating
my tears fastly falling
and now my ears are ringing
my eyes are blurung
my stomack is stiring
my heart is slowly stoping
my soul is crying
i need acceptence
i need a home
but most of all i need you
and with out you im nothing
nothing at all
and now that your gone
im slowly
slowly drowing in my sorrow !

By Bre!​

 

[SilentEyz]

Thanks for Sharing.

 

[elluko]

looks like Silents got some competition now

 

[SilentEyz]

looks like Silents got some competition now

Oh Elluko, there is no competition in Poetry.. I encourage anyone and everyone to post what they right.. Whether they believe it to be good or bad, It is their hearts that create the words.. so therefore it is beautiful by all.

 

[darklove]

HAHAHAHAHA LOL IM GOOD nah lol im just kidding thanks you guys but really silent what did you think bout it its not as "Deep" as yours lol but what do you people think Btw peoples need to CHAT!!!! lol thanks anyways byebye! Bre

 

[Babygirl7182]

i really liked the poem thank you for posting it.