Debauchery's Repeating

[Dana]

It's a night like every other
The same thing he's done before
Getting dressed up to hit the door
Plans for the night
Time to hit the dance floor
Drink in hand
The first one gone
Next in hand
So on and so on
The night is a blur
Memories are a haze
The weekend passes by
into week days
It's Friday again...
Where does it end?
Where does he finish?
Another drunken weekend...

 

[Codrus]

It's a night like every other
The same thing he's done before
Getting dressed up to hit the door
Plans for the night
Time to hit the dance floor
Drink in hand
The first one gone
Next in hand
So on and so on
The night is a blur
Memories are a haze
The weekend passes by
into week days
It's Friday again...
Where does it end?
Where does he finish?
Another drunken weekend...

Awesome Dana :thumbup

 

[Dana]

Thanks. Not my best but it was on my mind today.

 

[Codrus]

It's a night like every other
The same thing he's done before
Getting dressed up to hit the door
Plans for the night
Time to hit the dance floor
Drink in hand
The first one gone
Next in hand
So on and so on
The night is a blur
Memories are a haze
The weekend passes by
into week days
It's Friday again...
Where does it end?
Where does he finish?
Another drunken weekend...

I find a certain familiarity in this poem,...just needs chicks in it and it would be .....wait for it...












...all about me...:24:

 

[HK]

I find a certain familiarity in this poem,...just needs chicks in it and it would be .....wait for it...

...all about me...:24:

I thought this bit was about chicks :ninja

Where does he finish?

 

[Codrus]

I thought this bit was about chicks :ninja

Maybe in Dana's version,...mine would have a more graphic depiction :ninja

 

[HK]

Maybe in Dana's version,...mine would have a more graphic depiction :ninja

And that's why this is poetry, and anything you do is pornography

 

[Codrus]

And that's why this is poetry, and anything you do is pornography

....only when I get paid for it:ninja