Comic life

[RibZ]

Anyone used it? I just did the freebie download and created a brochure. Interested to know others' opinions.

First draft:
Inside
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m82/ribsy_2006/Diversity Arts/brochureinside.png

Outside
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m82/ribsy_2006/Diversity Arts/brochureoutside.png

Please don't quote in replies. This is a draft.

 

[HK]

The outside is difficult to read because the letters all overlap each other. I would pick something that doesn't create that effect, it works for the big words on the inside but not for smaller text.

What size will it be when printed, or what size is it intended to be?

On the inside, the 'greater self awareness' box is misaligned. I would think about centering the text in the boxes and reducing leftover space on the boxes with extra room left in them.

I don't like the 'speech bubbles'. They don't serve a purpose - it looks like you're trying to use them as arrows? Especially on the outside, they look a little out of place to me. I do like the red and yellow colour scheme though it's definitely a good first draft but I think it needs to be cleaned up a bit.

 

[RibZ]

Thanks for the crit. It's a standard trifold. I saw a cpl of typos that need fixing, too.
I have another in the works and will post it when it's finished.