Closing my eyes

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SilentEyz

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I close my eyes,
My Heart, my soul
listening to the silence
the emptiness that is me

Disappearing from my sight
wondering if I was ever here
Blackness of my life
once again closes in

Purpose and need
escapes my view
wonderment occupies
wishing I knew

needs and desires
false hopes for more
breeding Distain
to my every breath

what others see
deepens the lie
facing the truth
is all I can do

Closing my eyes
my heart, my soul
Accepting the emptiness
walking its path.



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i feel like just saying very good very moving is never enough. your poems always show such strong emotion. I love it *hugs*
 

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i feel like just saying very good very moving is never enough. your poems always show such strong emotion. I love it *hugs*

I agree, im gona have to break out the thesauraus to come up with new adjective for your writing
 
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