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JackOfSpades

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I wrought this story and was wondering if any one would want to read it.
i will post the prologue and if you want more pleaz let me know.



Under City:265

Prologue


The year is 2285 after the third world war the underground-cities, or UCs, were built to house the poor, only the rich can live on the top side. Most people living the UCs have some form of mutation mostly slight ones stronger,faster, better sight. People with low-light, that’s what people call the night sight mutation, become what we down here call lighters. A lighter fixes, finds, builds, and do pretty much anything you’ll pay them to do. I am one of them, I was born with thelow-light. I am a lighter my name is Jack Mercer and I live in UC:265 aka Underground Skull City.
 
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I don't want to sound overly harsh but you very much need to work on your grammar and sentence structure. Even if you've got a fantastic, world-changing idea, no one is going to look twice if it's too difficult to read.
 
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