Appentence

[quarterican]

I used to love you just enough.
Four times a day I answered your calls;
you nourished me, and kept me going.
I used to look forward to you.
You would tell me when to go inside,
and when to sit down with you.
I used to listen to you.
You gave me advice that I followed,
never asking for too much.

I want to call it a "falling out".
You still call, but I don't answer.
I've found ways to live without you--
or at least around you,
because no matter how much I wish,
I'll never be without you.
You breathe with me;
You talk to me.
You live with me.
You eat with me.

I have to thank you for getting me this far.
Thank you, thank you, thank you, but
please. Please. I'm telling you:
Go away.

If I can learn to live with the knots in my gut,
you can learn to stop tying them.

 

[Homer]

very deep.

 

[Kat]

wow pat. Thats an amazing poem. It kicks me right in the gut cause I know that feeling so well. Very well written *hugs*

 

[Johnny]

Very Good

 

[SilentEyz]

Trick,

Absolutly amazing form of thought.. I love it.. Thank you so much for sharing that..

*waits impatiently for more*

 

[Charmer]

I like the structure of it. Good.