a song im working on

[Kat]

I know the tune i want it to be sung too...hopefully someday i can find someone to help me with that....but here goes what i have of it so far. I know its not finished but i wrote this in between standing in the rain so im just waiting for that next big storm to come to finish it.

I was standing in the rain today,
ya know it made me smile.

All my fears drifted far away,
for just a little while.

And the lightning struck,
It hit right to my core.
Memories of all the things I only dreamed before.
A new day; new start;
a light of hope in my heart.
A new way; new chance;
making my dreams come true.

The rain poured down;
and it swept me away.
Dreaming of lying in your arms;
no more tears today.


And the lightning struck,
It hit right to my core.
Memories of all the things I only dreamed before.
A new day; new start;
a light of hope in my heart.
A new way; new chance;
making my dreams come true.

Never want the rain to leave
and lose this feeling.
All the things it makes me believe;
to be happy in the end.

Now why is it, when the rain pours down...
I feel wild and free.
And yet when the sun comes out,
it steals the breath from me.

 

[Kat]

also i know this may not be the right way to write a song or have it set up but it was a first shot for me besides the ones i sing to kylie every night

 

[GraceAbounds]

That is freaking awesome Kat. I wish I could hear it to music.

 

[hhayes]

sounds really good stick with it!

 

[Sam]

Kat, rhythm is good ... flow is also nice .... I think u can do much better in this same song. But its just fabulous very tough to carve words as you have done