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Kat

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weak fool facing the mirror.
A carpet for everyone to wipe their feet.
What does your heart mean.
An empty shell is left.
Who will be there to glue you back together.

You are lost without a soul.
You live for someone else.
Weak on the inside and out.

Form without body.
Lifeless little shell...
You cannot even do for yourself.

Your heart left open,
for him to rip apart.
And yet you always try to find some hope.

Despise what you feel.
Hating all of you.
Hating what you do to make him smile...
Wishing for something worthwhile.

Bleed red...
will anyone accept?
Will anyone see past it to see you?

Learn from mistakes...
Give a second chance,
and for what?

Would they be better off without you,
the mistakes that youve made.
Is the reason that you live to cause them strife.

Pain it brings; a little feeling left inside.
Something there to gain a little while.

Hating who you are...and the desperation that comes.
Knowing the only thing that makes you smile...
That cheeky lil grin.
The innocence in her life.
Will you even bring her only strife?

Are you stronger than he thinks?
Is there more to life than this.
Is there love waiting there for you.

Lost alone...home what is this?
Dying even more each passing day.
What is wrong with you...
waht makes you be this way?
 
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Very insightful, personal writing, Kat. Hopefully, by writing it, some of your questioning soul was let out and less stress stayed in...
 

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counter poem ... sorry but the mood strikes

remember who you are and forget who you've been
listen to the words from all who have seen
the truth behind your words and the smiles you leave behind
the way you touch the heart soul and mind
the hope that glows from messages left ,so true
the truth, the beauty,the life, the potential

you
 

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oh god bagel...i dont think ive cried over something good like that...in a long ass time...thank you beyond words hun *hugs* <3
 
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