Poster for a show

[Dana]

thoughts?

 

[Staci]

all i see is a red X

 

[Dana]

hmm...

 

[jassilem]

I looks good!

 

[Natasha]

Shouldn't it be "songs" instead of "song"??? Other than that, looks good!!!

 

[Dana]

Shouldn't it be "songs" instead of "song"??? Other than that, looks good!!!

yes caught that reuploading and emailing

 

[Dana]

 

[Darrell]

Nice! :thumbup

 

[Staci]

i still only see a red X :dunno

 

[jassilem]

i still only see a red X :dunno

That's weird

 

[StripedCat]

I like it.

 

[rback33]

OK.. here goes...

It's WAY too wordy. It's a bitch to get through it all...

the green on black is too hard to read.

You used the same font on the entire flyer...

You name and email addy are too big and detracts from the rest of the flyer... the flyer is about the show and the venue not you...

capitalizing tons was OK, but the rest of that line looks out of place with the drink special info....

I think that's it for now...

 

[Dana]

OK.. here goes...

It's WAY too wordy. It's a bitch to get through it all...

the green on black is too hard to read.

You used the same font on the entire flyer...

You name and email addy are too big and detracts from the rest of the flyer... the flyer is about the show and the venue not you...

capitalizing tons was OK, but the rest of that line looks out of place with the drink special info....

I think that's it for now...

Noted and filed. The abundance of text was the point.

 

[Staci]

i still cant see it ....oh well

 

[Dana]

i still cant see it ....oh well

You got issues LOL

 

[Dana]

How bout now?

 

[retro]

Being completely honest... there really isn't anything that I like about that poster at all. The slanted text looks like crap, What does "21 Plus Five $$" mean? Your name shouldn't be that big, or even on the poster at all. You've got different sized test throughout it, is it at "Racks Bar and Grille"? Because that looks like Racks is another group playing or something, and then Bar and Grille looks like something else entirely... which goes back to text size and consistency. I really don't meant to be a douche or anything, but I wouldn't pay money for that.

 

[Natasha]

I do agree w/ the logo/name being too large.

 

[Dana]

Being completely honest... there really isn't anything that I like about that poster at all. The slanted text looks like crap, What does "21 Plus Five $$" mean? Your name shouldn't be that big, or even on the poster at all. You've got different sized test throughout it, is it at "Racks Bar and Grille"? Because that looks like Racks is another group playing or something, and then Bar and Grille looks like something else entirely... which goes back to text size and consistency. I really don't meant to be a douche or anything, but I wouldn't pay money for that.

My name is on the poster because im the one who made it and i don't trust people.

 

[Natasha]

I think you missed the point, though...what we were saying (or at least what *I* was saying) was that it's too large. Absolutely, protect your work...but maybe w/ a smaller mark.