Artist logo I'm working on...

[Dana]

What do you all think?

*edit* I got rid of the first as I added on.



I took off the fender logo...

 

[Ciara]

Looking good :thumbup

 

[Dana]

thanks

 

[NuckingFuts]

The first pic you posted I did not like. I was thinking you are better than that.:thumbdown

The second pic I like a lot. Good work.:thumbup

 

[Dana]

Thanks Tom

 

[Springsteen]

Good work. The frontal letting blends in well.

 

[pjbleek]

tbh: boring...it really doesn't show much, not showing you can think outside the box....

 

[darkcgi]

i doubt you can put the word fender on the logo
copywrite and all
looks good

 

[Darrell]

i doubt you can put the word fender on the logo
copywrite and all
looks good

You beat me to it. Fender is a registered trademark.

 

[CityGirl]

Looks good, Dana. A few of your fellow OTzies think you can do better. If this is your "one hand tied behind your back" effort, I can't wait to see the results of your "two hand" effort !

 

[jassilem]

Looks good .

 

[Zorak]

i doubt you can put the word fender on the logo
copywrite and all
looks good

You beat me to it. Fender is a registered trademark.

The fender stratocaster style shape of headstock (of which this fender bass in question uses) is also a registered trademark too! As are their telecaster, jaguar and jazzmaster shapes.

 

[darkcgi]

you could get by with the shape just change it a little

 

[Panacea]

I like it, ya watch out for the copyright stuff.

 

[darkcgi]

wood grain under gradiant with gloss platic wrap
adds detail
Mostly logos are simple
on the detail
its a common feature
easy to replicate on merchandise
less expensive and less ink when printing

 

[pjbleek]

wood grain under gradiant with gloss platic wrap
adds detail
Mostly logos are simple
on the detail
its a common feature
easy to replicate on merchandise
less expensive and less ink when printing

and unique:nod::nod::nod::nod::nod:

 

[Dana]

i doubt you can put the word fender on the logo
copywrite and all
looks good

You beat me to it. Fender is a registered trademark.

The fender stratocaster style shape of headstock (of which this fender bass in question uses) is also a registered trademark too! As are their telecaster, jaguar and jazzmaster shapes.

He wanted her Jagerstang on the logo, I just did what he asked don't shoot the designer. That is a Jagerstang. I just tried to vectorize it.



Why the fuck must one think outside the box on everything? You go by what your client wants and try to incorporate it. Thats how shit works.

 

[Dana]

I'm not looking for critiques from people who aren't even graphic designers by hobby. Just sayin.

 

[pjbleek]

all we are is offering opinion all you are looking for is positive, you never mention what or who wants what....and what is so wrong about looking at things differently?

plus we aren't graphic designers by design, hell you don't even have the degree!

 

[Dana]

I didn't know you had to have a degree to be a designer... Oh wait you don't.